Monday, December 15, 2008

KAMIKAZE(ADJ) part2

This is the 2nd part of the story I started prior2my disappearance but b4 u read this story I want u2FIRST predict the end of the story(if ur yet2read the story,go2d post titled kamikaze(adj) b4 u read this post)I noticed a psychological trend in the comments(which I will reveal later) That is why I want u2predict first so u dnt change ur mind after reading this post.The first part is stained with loads of grammatical errors and wrong spellings cos I rushed the story n also did no editing.
2MONTHS AFTER SEGUN'S DEPARTURE
Segun delayed his sleep for almost an hour so he cud be awake at 12am on the 9th of march 2008 to wish the love of his life a happy birthday and shock her with a surprise.Anxiously,he looks at his wristwatch for the umpteenth time but it said 11:58pm.He let out a loud sigh in exasperation...His eyes were drowsy.His muscles lazy.His kingsize bed exerted gravitational pull and seemed2call his name.It was somnambulistic.The 58mins had been grueling.The 2mins felt like forever."what the heck!"Segun snaped.He reseted his watch a minute and30seconds earlier.Satisfactorily,he stared at his Tag which then said 12am."Omo udon make me fall in love.U don make me fall in love" Victoria's phone rang but she was too buried in deep sleep by the weight of responsibilities and exhaustion."Omo udon make me fall in love" Victoria's phone rang again but the ringtone played in her dream a sweet music instead of waking her up.She smiled,turned her back2d phone,pedaled and slide a hand forward in a manner that seemed as if she clutched down,change gears and step on the gas,accelerating deeper in2sleep land.Segun was fraustrated.He felt like smashing his blackberry.He'd waited a grueling 60mins all for this?His bed held him.He couldn't resist anymore.He sets his alarm for3am.He had2b d first2call her.... "THIS IS SPARTA!!!" The alarm barked at Segun.Sluggishly,he gained consciousness.Slothfully,he called his wife.Drowsily,Victoria picked.Ecstatically,Segun spoke.Quickly,Victoria leaped2life shocked by whose online."Happy birthday dearie" Victoria smiled.She was touched.She loved this part of him.He was romantic its just that he is turn between work and home."How are u my queen?" "I'm fine,the kids are better" "Dmt talk bout the kids.2day is all4u" Segun interrupted."Awwh dats so sweet.I miss u" "Guess what?" Segun jumped in."Emm... ur coming home?" Victoria said sarcastically."How did u know?Yes I am"
“NO!U kid me right?” She said in excitement. “Seriously.I’m bringing myself as birthday gift.I’m coming with the afternoon flight” “AHHH!OH MY GUSH(3ce)” She shouted ecstatically.Her birthday couldn’t be any happier.She missed him.”Come pick me up at the airport at 3pm” “WOW!I’ll.Thats another 2hour drive but its worth it” “Awwh,I miss you dear.I miss you.I miss combing your hair with my fingers.I miss licking your earlobes.” They whispered beautiful nothings for the next hour.
Demola stepped in the house.It looked different-red and lovely.He could see joy-written in the air.It was like xmas.U need not be told its xmas with all the lightened trees,atmosphere and faces.”What is happening this Saturday morning” Hem mused.Victoria slid down the stairs and around the sitting room like a ballet.She winked at Demola to greet him.Her face was exceptionally bright.She still had her red night gown on and she sang “lady in red” to herself.Demola was puzzled but those intimidating breasts of Victoria’s jumped at him via the slightly transparent night gown.He’d lusted after them so so many times.He imagined his big ben between those twin towers.”Blood of Jesus!” He uttered snapping out of sin.We all have this “mojos” played in our minds at one time or the other.I think it’s a good thing we can’t see people’s thoughts.Gush,its so filthy and wicked!A sister sees a brother’s fallos protruding his trouser and her mind leaps to conjure all her mouth and hands can do with it.A dude sees a chair and he is transported via a time portal to what he did on the chair when sarah sat on his nail.But I think that’s the major difference between man and dogs.Dogs go on right ahead to fuck anything-including their mothers!Man,on the contrary has this resistor called common sense.It checks him.”Hey man,shes hot but shes ur friend’s aunt” “Hey girl,hes brad pitt but he is your sister’s”(for where?enough pple go still disobey this one o lol) Even the most pious men have these thoughts but I think its still within civility and morality when we contain these thoughts.
“Whats happening o?” Demola finally spoke.”Today is my birthday” “OH!My bad.I forgot” “And segun is leaving work to be with me today!” Victoria added gleefully.”Ehen.Nowonder” “I need to go change and go pick Segun.Heres some money please get lunch for the kids and yourself” At 1pm.Victoria called Segun who informed her he is on the way to the airport for his 1hour flight to Las gidi scheduled for 2pm.Excitement brimming in Victoria,she rushed to the airport.Its been an hour into her drive from Ajah to the airport.Now she is stuck in traffic on the 3rd mainland bridge.Shiana Twain’s “you are still the one” played on the radio.It was perfect.She reminisced.”Omo, udon make me fall in love” Victoria looks at the caller ID-True love.Its Segun.”Hello my love” She said gleefully like a kid handed a pack of candy.”Em…Hi” The voice on the other end of the line lacked the enthusiasm it carried at 3am that morning.”Whats the problem?” Victoria quizzed.”Em…There is a…em…problem at the office.Someone messed up and I must fix it if not the company would be in trouble with NCC.I can’t come to Lagos anymore.” Victoria was shattered.It was better he hadn’t made the promise.Tears dripped down her chics.She lost grip of herself.Her lips quivered.“Isn’t there any other way” Victoria asked helplessly.”You know if there is,I would” Segun sadly replied.Her phone dropped from her fidgeting fingers.The jeep decelerated till it came to a halt in the middle of the road.She buried her head in the steering wheel.The horn blasted away!”Hello!Hello!Are you there my love?” Segun cried.At that moment,Tracy Chapman’s “Sorry-sorry,is all that you can say….but you can say baby,baby can I hold you tonite” aired through the radio….

28 comments:

Buttercup said...

1ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssst! woohoo!

just clamin my spot..i'll be back to read!

Rebirth said...

tell me Victoria didnt go crying on Demola's shoulders! and then one thing led to another......... hmm, just jumping gun........ nice writing,both pt 1 and 2

wellsbaba said...

lol!!! bcup ur jobless...is HE so sweet u cnt take timeout2read ma post??? LOL ur not 1st jare I giv it to funms...
@funms exactly! I want u 2jump d gun!but I askd u2predict b4 readin d post

soul child said...

your back....nice wrting...

Anonymous said...

i agree with soul child,great writting!

Buttercup said...

hahaha no vex na..

no o, i was the 1st to comment, it doesnt matter what the content of the comment was.. *sulks*

hmm ok, i dont like predicting the obvious n the obvious thing here is that she n demola wud have an affair..

sooooooo, i'ma just wait for the conclusion!

Nigerian Drama Queen said...

Hmm I read Part I and this one. I have a feeling Victoria is cheating or will cheat with Demola. Great writing!

A few tips: Watch out for minor spelling/grammatical errors...and whenever someone is talking, you should start the " " on a new line...

Just minor stuff though. I'm glad your back. Cant wait to read the next part...

InCogNaija said...

fk up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wellsbaba said...

soulchild thanx!i didnt evn know u read ma blog.y uno dey comment b4 naw?
@majoram n 9jadramaqueen C MA ENEMIES!ow can u say great writing?u want ma head2swell n burst? lol 9jadrama,its noted.thanx again
incognaija LOL

Anonymous said...

oloshiuos fellow. I cannot have his Job come first men! Arghhh! I should always come FIRST. SHe is so going to do it with that man, demola or what is his name and I do not blame her. or maybe she is going to drive over the third mainland bridge? Hmmm who knows!

Geebee said...

Man, this is the s**t. I've been hooked ever since the last part of this story but was somewhat depressed when u vanished. Glad KAMIKAZE is back. Nice story. Suspense-filled and entertaining. Prediction. I can hardly predict, especially cos this one's totally unlike any of those crap they do on nollywood.

My guess though is that Demola ends up being the shoulder Victoria can lean on as a result of her husband's absence . . . and from there, something else might go wrong that would have all their lives (Segun's Victoria's, the twins and Demola's) changed forever. Now i hope you won't change whatever story you had cooked up if I predicted correctly. lol. I'm hooked here, bro!

wellsbaba said...

TEMITE wat wil u do if ds d way ur husband bhaves lyk ds?
GBENGASILE ur rily makin ma head xpand o.is d story ds gud?

LushChic said...

dis ur post loooooonnnng o!!!!

LushChic said...

now im going to read........and leave a comment.....(mayb),lol

Rayo said...

u berra not kill her off and u better throw us a curve else i'll have ur head.

wellsbaba said...

ABBY LOL lazygirl i wonder ow u passed waec
RAYO u alwais wanted my head*winks*

LG said...

helloooooooooooo' anybodi home????
i ve got sum hampers 4 u :)
*merry christmas to u n mummy

Anonymous said...

Like I said in the 1st part,it looks like victoria and Demola will get really really "cosy"...Great story...can't wait to read part3

Anonymous said...

I never want this shit to ever happen to me EVER!!!! God!!! u don hear me soo!!! please!!! As a person I'd have turned off ma phone and any other office influences once I'd had ma mind headed for lagos...FAMILY FIRST...PERIOD...I think ma dad did enough of that for me to know otherwise...great writing dad! keep it coming oh

Rita said...

Happy New Year...

IDK said...

noo!!..gosh no1 (covers face with hands) pls dnt tell me she;s goin to 'drown' her sorrows in demola...dat's actually wat i predicted but pls dnt let it be truuuu(says last part with a dramatic finish)
******curtains closed***********:P howdy do??:P

Rayo said...

i bo lo tun ti gba lo. wakabout

Geebee said...

Don Wells, where art thou?

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

update...

Chris Ogunlowo said...

Hey Mister, where u @?

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