Wednesday, September 24, 2008

KAMIKAZE(ADJ)

I'm really sorry its taken me over a week to update plus I've not even commented on most of your blogs though I've read them.Its still because of my connection palava jare.Mz.dee,I must finally acknowledge you o(after 2weeks?),she gave me award o and me I'm also giving out the honesty award not in any particular order......

1)chari
2)buttercup
3)rita
4)theicequeen
5)sting
6)exschoolnerd
7)solomonsydelle
I'm not really following the rules please pardon me.Anywais,do you remember the ebony skinned chic and johnny bravo?I pondered within myself if I'm really scared of JB or intimidated by the girls,so I settled that by walking up to the girl(Gist later) For now,I giving out short stories and I hope you enjoy them.....
KAMIKAZE(ADJ)
"Segun.So when am I seeing you again?"With a sorrow choked tone,Victoria asked her husband a question she knew correctly the answers to.She just wished his reply would cheer her up this time around.Segun,a top marketing executive with etisalat the new GSM company that just rolled out.For the past 12 months,he has been with his family for a total of 22days having travelled all over the country leading the marketing campaign.Segun,a go getter,natural salesman(he could sell a rayban sunshades to ray charles)a synonym of success,had the target of reaching 5 million subscriber base for etsalat in the next month.Victoria on the other hand was a beautiful loving wife in her early thirties with two kids,a set of twins(a boy and a girl).She was a chorister at church who held a top spot at an advertising agency.Due to her husbands absense,shes had the gruelling task of being both father and mother.The scolder and pamperer of the kids.The disciplinary agent and the spoiler.she woke up 6am,readied the kids for school and prepared for work,drop the kids,off to work,at lunch shes gone to pick the kids at school with the driver,back to office,leave at 5pm,head to an eatery for lunch then straight home,help the kids with their assignments,go to church if there is any meeting that concerns her(if not they watch TV) then sleep by 9pm.This was what her easiest schedule was like.she had to draw energies from her body,spirit and soul to last this long.........
"Segun,I'm talking to you" but segun,engulfed,ransacking his room for his diamond studded cartier and couple of files vaguely noticed her presence let alone give her a reply.............
His silence punched her,she was dejected,her head dropped down in dismay and shoulders shrunk but being the good wife she was,Victoria reasoned her husband was almost late for his flight and needed to pack up real quick.She encouraged herself,letout a loud sigh to release some of the desperation and started towards the guestroom where she knew the exquisite cartier was.With a hand stretched out and a forced smile "here is your treasure" "No,my queen,you are my treasure"Segun interrupted.He drew close and followed up with a quick kiss to her forehead which felt rather mechanical than passionate.Instantly,hesitatingly,Victoria slipped her hands round the ignorantly insensitive male and leaned her sized 36 essence on his bear chest in a desperate attempt to capture his wondering attention.She succeeded.Atleast,he stood still for once and looked her in the eye.She searched for the words to convey her desperation but english grammar failed her.She is a full grown woman with needs,She has feelings,she needs to be touched and pampered.She didn't know how best to say it to him.She was tearing apart inside,crashing and tumbling within,she was thrown in hysteria.She squeezed him and like a dying King,she uttered powerful words in a frail tone.
"Segun,you are looking at me but not seeing me.You are hearing me but not listening to me.You are touching me but not feeling me.I'm here,you are there,my love,I'm lonely"The power of a woman.Those words stopped him more than Hancock could stop any fast moving train.
Those words tore through his strength in to his soul.The dripping of her tears sliced his heart but he only could feel the fret and desperation that culminated to those words AND NOT comprehend those words.He was confused.What was she talking about?To the best of his ability he'd been a great husband.He'd always loved her,made sure she and the twins lacked nothing,even bought her a range rover sport on her birthday.True,he usually is not around but he calls her everyday!At every idle minute he rings his other half.HE could feel the helplessness of his wife but didn't know what to do.He was sad she was sad.He tried to ponder but his mind was foggy.Slowly,segun's hands curled round the sobbing queen."It'll be alright" he muttered though he had no clue as to what really the problem was.Victoria was buried in Segun's tight yet comforting embrace,together they stood as one......................................................................................
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After bout a silence of 5seconds which seemed more like eternal bliss for Victoria.......
"Don't go"She said,as she was too afraid to say the whole sentence let alone tell him to resign which was what she really wanted to say."Don't go where?" Segun quizzed."Don't go to work"Victoria said angrily.Segun disengaged,stepped back and put his hands on her shoulder.Peering at her,he said"I know you are sad I"m leaving again but I've to work to earn money to sustain and give you and the kids a satisfying future"Victoria knew it was futile.She knew she couldn't just convince him to resign just like that except she had jazz or "touch and follow"ButSegunthetrailblazzerachieverambitiouslovingfaithfulyetinsensitiveunconciousegoistic
husbandorshouldIrathersayfatherofVictoria'schildrenkeptonrantingabouthisloveforhiswifefaith
fulnessdedicationsacrificeforhisfamilyandtriedconvincinghispathetichalfheisdoinghisbest.But
Segunfounditrelativelymoredifficultthanyoudidtoreadthissentencetoconsoleleastconvincehis
embitteredqueen.
Victoria was too buried in her sorrows she did not even hear the words escaping Segun's lips which she only saw moving.She was right there but not there.....
"Koun koun koun"There was a knock on the door.Segun opened the door of his heated room,DEmola was on the otherside of the door.Demola was a fair,interesting and pious 24year old who was their church member.He had a bosom relationship with the family and helped Victoria do alot of running arounds since Segun usually wasn't around to do them.Part of the family's kinematics depended on him.The twins were adorable,Demola loved them.He once used money meant for his Girlfriend's valentine gift to but toys for the twins.
"What are you still doing?You will miss your flight o"Demola barked.Segun dressed up and took the his stuffs."I've to go now,we'll continue when i get back.Please."Segun said to his absent wife.
An hour later,Demola drops Segun at the airport but before he goes"Demola,I got you this TAG watch,hope you like it" "Hey,thanx""By,the way when I arrive Kano I'll send some money to you so you can parol small with your chic""Correct,You are the man!""I've to run now,take care of my chrysler o,you know I love it!"........................
Hope you enjoyed your read o,it continues in the my next post.

30 comments:

NaijaBabe said...

Yayyyyyyyyyyyyy

NaijaBabe said...

Loooved it!!!!!!!!!

Mz. Dee said...

Wonderful story!! will be waitin 4 the next

Invisible said...

Part 2 must come o. I'm already playing what can happen in my head.

aloted said...

fanstatic!

meanwhile...why were u trying to blind us at that part where u joined all the sentences together..i beg o..lol

hmm waiting for part 2 o..am already imagining things!!!

Chris Ogunlowo said...

Correct story.

... and congrats.

wellsbaba said...

9ja babe thanx
Mz.dee,u wudnt wait 2 long b4 it hits u......
Invisible...you think you know what will happen abi?We shall c bout dat!
Aloted yes o,I wanted you guys2share a bit of victoria's pain...lol...n by d way dnt imagine anything o cos dis is not a nolloywood movie u can predict!
Aloofar!HEY! thanx man mi

Anonymous said...

baba mi! thanx for the award o!

I am truly grateful...I dedicate this award to you and the one i love! momma this one's for u!

I love this piece...personally I like the whole hardworking husband theme and all...I have a feeling I knw where this is headed buh let's see though...

IDK said...

I've been comin to check for update now...I want to get a better feel for the tori be4 I comment...

Femi B said...

ahh...Ive done the end in head already..well what i want the end to be. Can't wait for the continuation. There goes a super woman managing work,twins,church and an away husband

Rita said...

Thanks for the award...I am so touched...

Your story is captivating...I like...

LOL @ "he could sell a rayban sunshades to ray charles"

Segun is the typical man who is pursuing success but fails to see that what really matters is family...what if he has all the money in this world only to realise there's no one to enjoy it with him...do things in moderation...

Nice one...waiting for continuation...

miz-cynic said...

wellsbaba.....loooong time, howdy....been slacking on blogging a lot lately jare.lemme quikly go and read so i\lll have commented twice although the thn long and im feeling lazy

miz-cynic said...

am i jumping the gun or was mr i love my wife but i dont know how to convey it cheating?

Rayo said...

hmmn, i dey suspect this demola oh. quickly upd8, please...

Zayzee said...

hallo. sorry o. e don tale. saw ur text. my head is just.... i dont know. how is work and all?

this ur post short no be small

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

you haven't been here in a while. Hope all is well.

Rita said...

Ok...where are you and how are you doing?

Rita said...

I owe you some feedback on the essence of life?

Like you said, the most important thing in life is to know God. You are right so I do not need to give you further answers.

But if you would like to talk more, please send me an email on esurunma@gmail.com if u are ok with it.

Take care.

Buttercup said...

Wow i havent been here in ages, thanx for the award oooo! :D

Yea, it was nice talkin to u too! ;)

Let me go n read the story..

Buttercup said...

Hmm..may God bless me with a sensitive n attentive man o..poor victoria..

This was well written! U suppose don update na

Anonymous said...

So you dont think that its imperative that you update!!!

InCogNaija said...

you do realize that you just cant ex like that...no make i send my boys to come get you o!!!

LG said...

egbon' u can come back now o, shebi obama don win????? :p

LovePaprika said...

come back!!!!!!

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

where are you?

Nigerian Drama Queen said...

You! where r u hiding?

Anonymous said...

Beautiful one!wow!I'm amazed...
ermm do you think...Damola and Victoria....Awww naaaa....never mind!!!
Was just wondering ni!

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